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Fall From Grace: A Review of One Dark Throne

1.17.2018

 “Who knows what happened to the queens who were thrown down into the dark? Into the heart of the island, where the Goddess’s eye is always open. Who knows how she kept those queens or what she turned them into.”
One Dark Throne fails to uphold the legacy of its predecessor, Three Dark Crowns. Poor world-building and a cluttered plot mark its fall from grace.

Following The Quickening, an event showcasing the unique powers of triplet queens destined to murder each other in a gauntlet for power, sisters Katherine, Arsinoe, and Mirabella prepare to fight. To complicate matters, the girls face politics in their courts as they vie for suitors and political advantage, and the overseeing Council demands action. When naturalist Arsinoe attempts enlisting poisoner Katherine and elemental Mirabella to challenge the harsh tradition of murder, she faces opposition both from her sisters, now opponents, and the Council.

I had such high expectations for this novel, especially after enjoying Three Dark Crowns. The slow-moving plot, however, made reading this book a hassle. Complicated by unnecessary romances, the storyline strays from adventures and suspense to instead highlight the three sisters’ love interests and their companions’ love interests. The love triangle between Nicolas and Pietyr, for instance, distracted from Katherine’s interesting character development.

“As Nicolas takes his oaths before the High Priestess, Katherine’s mind wanders. It is not that she is not excited to be marrying him…He is so handsome and a good match for her. But he is not Pietyr.”

In this fantasy world, the plot hinges on the queens’ battle to determine the true ruler of Fennbirn during an Ascension Year, yet most of One Dark Throne’s drama emerges from picking suitors and separated lovers rather than cultivating abilities for upcoming battles. This discrepancy with the first book in the series represents a plot inconsistency that detracted from a promising idea.

The battle scenes, in comparison, were underdeveloped. After prefacing the queens’ fights with the elaborate Quickening in Three Dark Crowns, the forest chases, in which one queen would announce herself and run into the woods, seeking another queen, felt rushed and unorganized.

The pages dedicated to romance might have been better spent on filling plot holes, questions left unanswered in the duology regarding the nature of the sisters’ abilities, and developing the setting and side characters. Because of the additional romantic interests in the three sisters’ lives, tracking each of the side characters’ motivations, aspirations, and identities became a difficult task. I often found myself confused as I entered new chapters, trying to reconcile which character’s decision was impacting what other character. And still, I lack a clear picture of what each sister’s court really does, aside from arguing about poisoning, naturalist abilities, and elemental powers, and trying to intimidate others, and how the world of Fennbirn came to be. (Who established all these random, arbitrary dueling rules?)

Strong female friendships and the bittersweet conclusion redeemed the story for me, somewhat. For avoiding spoilers’ sake, I will refrain from naming the girls, but I appreciated their camaraderie and the conversations that made them more human. And the conclusion, unpredictable, left me thinking when I flipped the last page.

A disappointing sequel, although fans of Three Dark Crowns might enjoy it.

- ★★ -

16 comments :

  1. Sorry that this one wasn't better for you. I have heard a lot of mixed things aobut this series and haven't decided if I want to pick it up or not.

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  2. Gah, I'm a bit scared to read this one now. I really liked the complex plot and characters in the first book, and it seems like this one didn't let them shine enough. :( Definitely agree about the romance being unnecessary--I don't usually say this, being a lover of romance--even the first one didn't need it. :( Awesome review, though!

    (And I LOVE the opening photo. So cute!)

    - Aimee @ Aimee, Always

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  3. I was a HUGE fan of the first one (and all of other Kendare Blake's books, too) so I'm really interested to see where she takes this one. I totally understand your negative points, but honestly, I think I'll be fine with it. And I love the sound of strong female friendships (that was actually one of the thing I adored so much about the first in the series.) Anyway, I'm super interested to see how Kendare Blake wraps up the series.

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  4. Sorry it didn't work for you, I've heard so many mixed reviews!

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  5. Oooh, I absolutely love the picture you took! Great post!

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  6. I liked this one more but I agree about the romances. Especially Nicholas/ Petyr- ugh. It did need better battle scenes and a little more plot development too- the series does move kinda slow. I'm hoping the next one picks up the pace a bit.

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  7. I see so many mixed reviews for this series that I just can't decide whether to pick it up or not. I keep going for it in book shops, only to then put it back down and walk away.

    Thanks for the review - it's really helpful to know that you liked the first book a lot more than the second.

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  8. I've heard such amazing things about Three Dark Crowns but have yet to read it. Fantasy is not typically my genre so it takes a lot for me to pick one up. Sorry to hear this installment fell flat and didn't live up to its predecessor. That's always so disappointing - especially when the previous books was so engaging.

    Tanya @ Girl Plus Books

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  9. I've really wanted to read this series! I'm sorry this one didn't meet your expectations. I'm not a fan of love triangles, so that would have been a major bummer for me. I don't mind romance, in fact, I LOVE IT. I just like for there to be ONE romance, and then a lot of action and adventure. As always, wonderful review!

    Do You Dog-ear?

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  10. I came to your site through Elgee Writes. I haven't heard of this series. I know it's one I probably should have, though. But now that I read the sequel isn't that good, I'll find another series to sink my teeth into.

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  11. Hey there! I'm visiting after seeing your link on the Bloggers’ Commenting Junction :)

    What a lovely bookish nook!! Wonderful review as well. I've been on the fence with this one. I probably won't end up picking it up.

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  12. I have wanted to read this one for some time now. It's very close to the top of my TBR :) Great review! I love your blog. It's gorgeous and I wish I had a reading nook like yours.

    Megan @ Ginger Mom & the Kindle Quest

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  13. Ah sorry this was disappointing! I thought the first book was really slow and didn't enjoy it that much, so I can't imagine this one working for me either :(
    Lovely review!

    Beautiful blog, by the way :) I've been meaning to visit for a while but until now haven't got round to it.

    Amy @ A Magical World Of Words

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  14. how disappointing! I haven't picked this series up yet... something always made me pause. Great review and very concise reasoning behind your thoughts <3

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  15. Ahhh, I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this one! I liked it a lot and cannot wait for the next book, but I can totally see where you're coming from.

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  16. Sorry you weren't a fan of this one. I love the series and I wasn't disappointed by this second book because I love unraveling all the mysteries (and this book was good for that). I can see your complaints, though.

    Nicole @ Feed Your Fiction Addiction

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